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November 19, 2008
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devil

by ~k4muii

she is the devil in my life
her heart is as cold as ice
her doing is without a qualm
meanwhile she just stays calm

spreading her arms
she brings chaos to the world
she spins the yarns
and her mind didn't grow old

reigning as queen of destruction
her main weapon is seduction
her face is bright, it is smiling
but deep inside you make us riling

oh my buddha
will ever someone deliver us?
stop her causing suffering
show us her true face full of pus
:iconk4muii:
classmate ... she just pisses me off
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:iconkamiyah:
lool i loved the poem...u expressed really well. She looks very important to u :D
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:iconk4muii:
thank you very much =]

important ... have bad memories of her lol

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:iconkamiyah:
hm that's bad...even though, it's seems dat she made part of ur life, and that little part was important, good or bad...do u understande my point of view? xD

But look u have the thing for writting :D

oh and u are a buddhist (I thing it writes like this)that's aweeesome lool
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:iconk4muii:
yeah, i understand what u say =)

hehe ^^'

and ya, i am a buddhist (this is the correct writing =)), thank you =P

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:iconkamiyah:
u have to explain to me everything xD , I'm so interested innit :D
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:iconk4muii:
puh XP i'm a buddhist just since 2009 so i don't know everything that good ^^'

do u have icq,msn or skype? would be much more comfortable to chat and i'd like to chat about buddhism =)

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:iconkamiyah:
i have msn hehe this is my email: sumeiya_rachid@hotmail.com
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:icontecnido:
your a talented poet. :3
it's well written. <3
so you wrote it about your classmate,
or am I getting your artis comment wrong?
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:iconk4muii:
awww... thanks a lot =)

yah, this is about a classmate ... well I'm a buddhist and try at least to be neutral to all kind of living beings, but it's hard not to hate her >.<

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:icontecnido:
your most welcome. :)

oh I see... I have the same type of person in my class so I can relate to that feeling. I'm usually a very patient person, but not around my classmate. ^_^;;
but I bet your doing a good job as a buddhist tough. :3
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